My name is Alex and I want to tell you about me. My hobbies are art, riding bikes, and skating. I have a dog, mom, and dad. I used to have a fish and a turtle. My best friends are Jeremiah and Mark. I like all of the colors.whiy you ask cause i dont reiley have a favert coler. my reall best friend is jeremiah.me and mark are reladed.we where are adopted.Now I'm going to tell you about school. I like to draw. I like when teachers give me candy. I need to work harder in class. exspashaley when im now a 11 my birthday is septemer 6 i was born in 1999.now i will tell you that i just to traw aney think that is on my mine. Lastly, I will tell you about my goals. My personal goal is to stop obsessing about money. My academic goal is to get better grades. In the future, I see myself as a BMXer and a skateboarder at the X Games. i like to skate i can do a alley and grind also i can surf the bol at hobart park.
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib
Alex, What kind of art do you like to do? Do you like to draw, paint, or color with markers? What kind of dog do you have? What is your dog's name, what were your fishes and turtle's names? How are you and Mark related? Who is your favorite X-Games athlete? If you could go back in your essay and answer my questions that would be great! -Heather L.
Alex Vargas
8/26/10
My name is Alex and I want to tell you about me. My hobbies are art, riding bikes, and skating. I have a dog, mom, and dad. I used to have a fish and a turtle. My best friends are Jeremiah and Mark. I like all of the colors.whiy you ask cause i dont reiley have a favert coler. my reall best friend is jeremiah.me and mark are reladed.we where are adopted.Now I'm going to tell you about school. I like to draw. I like when teachers give me candy. I need to work harder in class. exspashaley when im now a 11 my birthday is septemer 6 i was born in 1999.now i will tell you that i just to traw aney think that is on my mine.
Lastly, I will tell you about my goals. My personal goal is to stop obsessing about money. My academic goal is to get better grades. In the future, I see myself as a BMXer and a skateboarder at the X Games. i like to skate i can do a alley and grind also i can surf the bol at hobart park.
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Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib
Alex, What kind of art do you like to do? Do you like to draw, paint, or color with markers? What kind of dog do you have? What is your dog's name, what were your fishes and turtle's names? How are you and Mark related? Who is your favorite X-Games athlete? If you could go back in your essay and answer my questions that would be great! -Heather L.